Bulliet and BDSM

He came to her broken.  She was broken too, but he was more broken than her.  She answered the door naked as he’d demanded.  He was still in his work uniform, all black, and holding a bottle of Bulliet.  He followed her to her room, and grabbed the shot glasses from her TV tray that had been there since Halloween.

Shot after shot, and suddenly he snapped.  He shoved her onto the bed.

Hard

Then he started choking her until she could barely breathe.  She didn’t care.  She loved it.  This was the shit that she lived for.  It took the pain away.  But this time it was different than she was used to.  He was being rougher than usual, and she could tell that this was one of the times that required rest and recovery afterwards.

“I need a little break,” she gasped after an hour.  She could already feel the bruises forming.

He snapped again.

He jumped off the bed and yanked on his clothes. He was wasted.  Utterly trashed.  He nearly fell onto his face trying t step into his boxers.

Once he managed to get dressed, he stormed out the front door.  It was then that she realized what was going on.  He was leaving.  Not that she really cared, but he was wasted and she lived in downtown.  The last thing he needed was a D.U.I.  so she chased after him.  His car was already running and he was trying to drive away.  She got into the passenger seat and turned to face him.

“What the fuck is your problem?!? All I said is that I needed a break”

“I don’t give a fuck, Bitch. I don’t need you.  I got court tomorrow, I just got dumped over this shit. I don’t need these problems. I. Don’t. Need. You.”

“Michael, you are drunk as fuck,and I live in downtown. Just turn off your car and sleep here for the night.  You really don’t need a DUI after everything you’re already facing” she pleaded with him.

He screamed in her face.  It was a frustrated, wordless scream and it terrified her, but she held her ground and kept her face void of emotion.  Then he got out of the car, leaving it running, and walked toward her house.  She tried to turn off his car. Fucking piece of shit BMWs.  She could never figure out how to work them, but the truth of the matter was she was shaking too much to even attempt to free his keys.

“Michael,” she screamed at him as she got out of the car and chased after him for the second time that night, “Your car is still running.”

He shoved her to the side, and proceeded to turn off his car.  Then he walked into her house and passed out on her bed.

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2 thoughts on “Bulliet and BDSM

  1. An interesting story. At first it seems as if these are two people who could care less about each other. They are clearly using each other for their own selfish gains. Interestingly, the female in this decides to intervene and help save the man from quite possibly a destructive scenario. Although she could care less about him, she decides to save him from a DUI. Presumably she is trying to stop a potential tragedy for the greater good of society, as any reasonable person would do. However, the author states “the last thing HE needs is a DUI.” Something inside of her cared enough about the person who nearly choked her to death to run out of the house (naked?).

    But why? The author insinuates that these are selfish and “broken” people. Selfish and broken people aren’t interested in the suffering of anyone but themselves. Perhaps one can infer that despite being damaged or traumatized, it’s impossible to lose our humanity and that our true nature as humans is to be altruistic. Or maybe the female really does care about the man who almost choked her to death. But if so why state that she could care less?

    But seriously, did she run out of the house naked?

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    1. Alex…I appreciate your observations. The protagonist saves the man from a DUI out of selfishness rather than altruism. She wants him around so that she can continue to use him to make herself feel better about her own “brokenness”. I will try to find a way to make this more clear & let you know when I have revised it. Also, I never really thought about whether or not she runs after him naked…but now that it’s been brought up I absolutely LOVE the idea. She will most definitely chase after him naked in the revised version ^_^

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